You are defined by what you do. If you do nothing, you do not exist.
-Cothonian proverb
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Just finished your book. Was surprised by how short it was, like I finished the book within an afternoon short, but I still enjoyed it never the less.
The over all writing was good, character development... was good enough when you take into account how short the book is. The over conflict was a bit of a miss for me, but I feel the larger conflict wasn't the main focus so I'll let it pass. Nice blend of sci-fi and reality, and you wrote with intelligence, I'd almost wager you to have some military background that or you did a little bit more research than most people do.
All in all, I felt the book is a decent afternoon read that shouldn't be nit picked. I can see how some may be thrown off (I didn't like the ending), but I still liked the book in the end. My main gripe is the book's length, though that's a personal problem, not a writer's problem.
My over all, non-official rating: 7.5-8/10 a good read if you have a few hours to burn (like you're waiting for a bus or plane etc).
Glad I could help!
Just bought your book off Amazon, should get here by Monday. I'll let you know how it goes =)
I appreciate it :)
Very fascinating... I'm trying to write my own book, so your stuff has plucked a very personal cord with me. Good job mate!
Like your stuff!